Redos: Yay, another redrawn chapter. :)

I'm particularly proud of this one - it's kilometers better than the original version. X3 Which is almost too bad, because it has so few comments. ^^;

Hey there. A friend of mine showed me this comic. :D I have to say, you've got the start of a story here, and you've lovely art. Unfortunately, I'm being turned off by a few things...

For one, though your comic has a start, I'm personally having difficulty keeping up with the story, even this early in, because things aren't clear. I see that there's a fantasy setting underlying the characters and their stories, but it's hard to understand that fantasy aspect when I'm not used to the characters yet. If you ever revise this, you may want to look into a stronger character introduction.

Your art is great. :D *claps* You're also to be applauded for giving your comic a background and setting. One thing that is continually bothering me, though, is that the waists on your characters, especially the females, are often thinner than their faces, and it makes them look anorexic. D8 You may want to look into improving that.

Other than that, I hope your comic goes well.

What an excellent start! This definitely has an interesting plot and I'm getting hooked. The art is fantastic as well, very nice character design. Great job! Keep up the awesome work, my friend.

~ SDB, the sarbid nuclear ninja hamham >:3

(Since I'm tired..and too lazy to send note or e-mail or message or whatever...I'll comment here.)

I'll have to wait until my computer gets fixed..so might be a while before I send more fanart. XD;

dude... this comic rules. ^_^